Fine morning,
Birds were singing,
Smooth sailing,
They were laughing.
Mutual attraction,
Strong affection,
Love in action,
Near perfection.
A sudden storm,
Killed the norm,
The reigning storm,
Marred the form.
Laughter ceased,
Conversations missed,
Hostility increased,
In silence hissed.
Nobody understands,
How love transcends,
Through the rain,
Though in vain.
~shake-ki-spear~
22 September 2006
** product of extreme boredom during lessons.
Friday, September 22, 2006
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so despo till must put your phone number there mehh?
HAHAHAHA xD
jealousy consumes you.
SWT. jealousy consumes ME?!
your head larhh.
i meow ypu =]
*you
Hey dude. It's a great poem! It sounds very deep... although a more appropriate title would have been better. 'Tis too long, think you not? Haha.
~verus rara avis~
thanks bro. am stil thinking of a better title. btw, dats my hp number. LOL.
Heya! Nice poem, albeit the length of it. XD.
publicising ur number on the net, ey? hahah.
yo yo...so long didn't visit ur side adi...wat la u wanna let ppl know ur num...so desperate meh!!!nice poem anyway
it's good stuff =)
i like the poem. nice rhyming..=)
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